Independent Writing in Year 4

Last week, Year 4 completed their independent writing as they wrote a setting narrative. 

Using inspiration from ‘The Whale’ by Ethan and Vita Murrow, they used writing techniques such as fronted adverbials, modified noun phrases, similes and metaphors to plan, draft and publish incredibly atmospheric pieces of work.

The children’s use of ominous and eerie language to describe the ocean setting displayed outstanding learning.

By Timothy Ingall

Year 4 Kingfishers Class Teacher